Final Script
After feedback again from the lecturers, we revised the dialogue that was in the script, as it still wasn't quite there. We shortened some of the lines from the butter, as time is a concern at the moment for the animation. As well as this, Michelle Z, Michelle C and I thought over the weekend for more puns for the "three part act", needing the "first act".
After whittling it down "I'm so slick." and "I am the cream of the crop." we presented them to Dane, asking for his final opinion. We went with "cream of the crop", completing our script.
After whittling it down "I'm so slick." and "I am the cream of the crop." we presented them to Dane, asking for his final opinion. We went with "cream of the crop", completing our script.
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